事故描述求助

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发信人: luoskywalker (老头), 信区: Automobile
标  题: 事故描述求助
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Fri Aug 31 16:26:27 2012, 美东)

请版上的大牛帮忙把把关，上周一辆车hit and run了我的车，我当时抄了车牌，报警
，警察根据我的描述判了对方的责任，今天警察局告诉我，对方司机已经找到，证实了
他的车和我的车有刮蹭，警察给了他俩ticket，同时把对方保险信息告诉我，让我通知
保险公司，现在唯一要注意的是，对方的保险公司和我一样是geico，听说geico有时候
很极品，会尽力从索赔者描述找找flaw，然后把责任改成50-50，万能的车版是我索赔
的依靠，我把我的事故描述发给大家看看，麻烦大家帮我找找碴，前10个包子答谢。顺
利拿到赔偿，另外有双簧包答谢。
先是我的中文描述：
晚上8点左右，我开车从东面的入口进入一个十字路口，当时我怀孕的妻子在车上，我
要左转，这个路口有两条左转lane，我在右边的左转lane，并在整个事件中一直保持在
同一条lane上，我将转到南边的通路，南边通路有两条lane，所以我左转完之后，我仍
然在右边的lane，当我进入路口的时候，左转绿灯一直在亮，在我已经完成左转，进入
南面的路口并开始知直行的时候，一辆从西边入口进入十字路口的车开始右转，打算转
入我正拥有路权的lane，那辆车的司机应该yeild我，但是他没有yeild，当我发现他没
有yeild我的时候，我立即啥车，同时他也意识到我们两车将要相撞，他也刹车，我们
两车在相距很近（说实话这个很近我不清楚我需不需要给个确切的描述）的地方同时停
了下来，当时我认为，我车之间的空间已经不够他右转到我的lane，所以我原地等待对
方倒车，并让我通过，然而，对方依然右转，并刮蹭到我的保险杠的右前角，造成我的
保险杠有钱角凹陷，同时临近的转向灯和雾灯被刮碎，因为刮蹭非常突然，我没有时间
鸣笛向对方报警，就在我以为对方会停车的时候，对方加速前行，我立即加速跟踪，并
记下号码，同时报警，在我报警的同时，我鸣笛试图让对方停下，不久对方左转到另一
条路，因为我的妻子已经怀孕，我为防止再出意外，就停止追踪，同时等待警察赶来。
下面是我的英文表述，写的很烂，求轻拍:
At 8 PM Wednesday, I was driving my can and entering the east entrance of
the intersection between**and **. There is two left turn lanes. I was
driving on the right one. During the whole event I kept on the same lane.
The south entrance which I turned left into also have two lane. Therefore,
after my left turning, I was still on the right lane. My wife was sitting on
the front passenger side. She was pregnant. Because the green light for the
left turn was on, I made a left turn. When I finished turning left and
started move forward,a black Honda car from the west intersection tried to
right turn to my lane. The driver on that car should yield to me. There was
a yield sign for this driver. The driver didn't prepare to yield. When I
realized that, I braked and stopped my car immediately. The driver also
realized my car and stopped. The front part of that was already on my lane
in front of my car. At that time, there was very little space between the
two stopped cars. I didn't restart my car because I need that car to go back
.To my surprise, that car continued to turn right and scratched the right
front part of my bumper. My right front corner mark and right front Fog
lamps were also broken. The scratch was happened suddenly, I didn't have
time to ring and alert that driver. When I thought the driver should stop
and wait for the police, the driver accelerated. I also accelerated to get
the tag number. At the same time, I made a call to 911 and reported the tag
number. I also shouted and rang and tried to stop that car. Soon that car
turned left to another road. Since my wife is pregnant. I didn't dare take
any other risk. I stopped tracking and waited for the police.

以上就是我准备的statement，请大拿指点，多谢了。
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